Friday 22 November 2013

Class Feedback on our Final Cut

Good:

  • Good Narrative
  • Variety of Shots
  • Transitions 
  • Good performance of by actor
  • Like the fade from black and white to colour near the end
  • Matches genre
  • Angled Shots
  • Footage follows the beat of the song
  • Mise En Scene 
  • Filters 
  • Ending on stage
  • Clever transitions between shots
  • Lighting at the end is really effective and makes it look like a real stage 
  • Use of fades during concert scene shows time is passing. 
  • Editing on the beat
  • Relevant to lyrics
  • Star represented well
  • Filters used looked good
  • Costume works well for song genre
Improvements:

  • Could improve lip syncing at points 
  • Guitar strumming is sometimes out of time with the strumming in the song
  • Some shots are untidy and shaky 
  • Improve quality
  • Need to change chord on guitar anymore
  • Could have varied location more
With regards to the improvements, as a group we feel that some of them are warranted such as the lip syncing and the guitar strumming but these are only at some little points in the video and overall we think that these points work throughout our video. We thought we used a range of locations for our performance and we could only really use a few to get the narrative of our video across. We tried to mask the lack of locations we could use through the angles and movement of the camera which we think worked really well. There was one shot which was a bit shaky but this was the best we got as we didn't have a dolly so we had to use it and this was one point we could definitely improve on next time by using a dolly. The quality is fine and we think it was the projector that our video was played on that made it look bad as we made sure that the video was of the best quality and on YouTube is played at 1080p.

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