Rough Cut Feedback/Response

Group 13
Level 4

• all we can fault is there are possibly too many overlay effects when he's famous.
• hand held camera sold star persona as growing in fame.
• really effective transitions.
• possibly add some filters/effects at beginning of narrative or splits.

Group 18

Level 4

• really good storyline!
• lots of different shot types that adds variety to the video
• realistic acting
• Needs colour correction.
• Overlay add a sense of journey.

Group 17

Level 4

• Good different camera angles.
• Lip sync on point.
• Narrative was brilliant and clear.
• Camerawork was shaky at times.
• Needed more filters.
• Costume change was really good, works well.

Group 15

Level 4

• Transition between shots were really good e.g. the change from poor to rich.
• Fades between the shots fit with the pace of the music.
• Lighting and fades during the performance scene was really good, shows time is passing.

Response:

We think that the feedback was very fair. We weren't really told too much of what we need to improve on but what we were told, we already were